1. Consistancy of design from page to page -
The page design is the same every time you click on one of the series. First, it brings you to a description, then a link and finally, large-scale photos of the series.
2. Color and Design - The color of the text varied from link to link - it might have been more cohesive if you had stuck to one or two colors. The main index page of the site is interesting, but a bit hard to figure out because I didnt see any names that indicated what each of the links brought you to...the photos didnt seem like links. I liked the film strip border idea though - it was a good way to tie in the header and the series posted on the left side.
3. Use of Imagery: The images seem to be organized well. Each one is set up the same way. Thus, there is consistency within the whole website's construction.
4. Use of line/color/ text - As stated previously, it would have been good to stick to one or two colors and used them throughout the whole website. Also, it would have been interesting to see a simple, but different font other than times new roman. The index page is clean, concise and neat to look at.
5. Descriptions of Projects: Some were more clear than others. Series One's description was a bit too simple. I would have liked to know why the project was called 'evil' or the thinking behind its construction. Series Two's description worked well with the coinciding pictures. The same for Series Three.
6. The bio seemed to be well though out. In the future, it might be cool to include links or additional information related to your creative processes.
Overall, nice job!
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